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As I Lay

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As I Lay

As I woke up in the morning,
I didn't smell your sweet scent,
I miss your smile as you began to go down.
As our eye's meet,while you continue to eat.
The moan's you make,
as if your eating a piece cake.
You lick me like I'm a limondrop,
as I stroke you keeping you hard as a rock.
As the blood rushes to both of our heads,
our body's melting into the bed.
I take your hand into mine,
as our body's intertwine.
I look up at you, one last time,
saying  to myself  you'll alway's be mine.
Then I realize I'm stareing at a wall,
and you were never really here at all!

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:37:00 AM
    omg so in love with this poem! great write and congrats on being featured

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 2/17/2013 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awww thanks Monica.
  1. Date: 2/15/2013 5:10:00 PM
    wow..Twanna, you should enter this in Cyndi's spicy contest.., hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 2/17/2013 8:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Poet destroyer :-)
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 4:40:00 PM
    Wow!!! No comment..lol..smh

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 5/18/2012 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol...oh wow I hope dats a good thing.
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 3:52:00 PM
    A real "Cold Shower" read!!! great flow... Michael

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 12/14/2011 3:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lol...thanks Michael...so silly....lol...thank you. :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 4:58:00 AM
    * "PS. I FIND MYSELF COMPLETELY MESMERIZED BY THE FIRST FEW LINES OF THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM * 'SWEET SCENTS * EYES MEETING * MOANS' * I LOVE IT * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * TWAS JUST STOPPING BACK BY TO THANK YOU LOVELY FOR THE KIND VISIT * JOY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 12/6/2011 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww! ...Thank you Sarah :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2011 11:48:00 AM
    * "PS. * I MUST FAVOURITE YOUR BEAUTY * BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * A JEWEL TO FOREVER BE CHERISHED * KEEP PAINTING MY DEAR * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 12/5/2011 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Aww your da best! :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2011 11:45:00 AM
    * "OWWW, BUT WHAT A SWEEET DREAM * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL TWANNA * I LOVE THE EROTIC & DETAILED INTENSITY & PASSION WITHIN YOUR RADIANT BEAUTIES MAGNIFICENT PAINTING * CAPTURES HEARTS & SETS AFLAME BEAUTIFUL THOUGHTS & DREAMS * BURN DOWN THE WALLS THAT LOVE MAY RISE * BEYOUND THE EDGES OF TIME * PURE BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 12/5/2011 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sarah... Im so happy you enjoyed reading it :)