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Suns rays reflect off rippling water Shows the shadow of boy playing He's on waters edge to look For creatures of the sea With colorful fins To reflect rays Water moves To hide Prize

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:14:00 AM

    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 10:43:00 AM

    This imagery reminds me of being a young boy playing in the tide pools by the ocean. Well done, Tom. Filled me with nostalgia.

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 9:23:00 AM

    excellent imagery in this one. enjoyed! happy Holidays! Hugs, catie :)