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The Weather

The drop spreads, freezing
Cleaning mist falls from grey skies
I see memories

In silence we go
Water lilies lie around
Through the field of stars

I'm anew my breath,
frozen white by icy air.
You were golden sun

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  1. Date: 12/20/2011 1:45:00 PM

    A walk down winter streets, eh? With the stars and the freezing air for inspiration. This is refreshing. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 8:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Grace. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol

    Williams Avatar Grace Williams Date: 12/19/2011 9:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much! Do you know how one sees the featured poets? I am very curious to see how that works
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 9:08:00 PM

    I love Weathery poems Grace thanks I enjoyed this. Patrick

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 10:30:00 AM

    Grace, nicely penned, hope this is the first of many..David

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 5:31:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Grace. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol