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You

You
Always
Are there to
Brighten my days
And leave me smiling from ear to ear

I wish to be held by you forever
If only you
Knew how I
Felt about
You

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  1. Esquire Avatar
    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 4/17/2013 9:45:00 PM
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    Dear Rebecca, YOUR Versatality in Forms is Remarkable. this is a Perfect Tetractys. The "YOU" in this POEM is very lucky for YOU to put YOUR Heart out for. YOUR line "felt about" could be felt for, or felt with to be 2 syllables.Superb Quill. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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    Jonas L. Rozario
    Date: 10/24/2012 10:31:00 AM
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    Another nice tetractys...you have mastered this form. Very good write...enjoyed!!
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 12/21/2011 5:29:00 PM
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    Ah! How sweet. :-P I wonder who that one's for....*hmmmmmmm* Joker: ME of course!!!!! Laura: hahaahaha! Indeed! Always, Laura

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin Date: 12/22/2011 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you're such a dork lol :P . . . and yes it is about whom you think it is--what's your point? hahaha
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/8/2011 12:55:00 PM
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    Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Rebecca. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol


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