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Below is the poem entitled House which was written by poet Juli- Michelle. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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House

                                                        
                                               
                                                        tri-
                                                 angle angle
                                              i am the triangle
                                           this is the shape that
                                      eventually becomes the roof
                                  triangle, triangle, triangle, triangle
                             i am a triangle, triangle, triangle, triangle
                         i am the triangular roof of the rectangle below
                            perimeter perimeter perimeter perimeter
                            e                                                       r
                            r                                                       e
                            i                                                        t
                            m               THIS IS A RECTANGLE         e
                            e                   I AM THE HOUSE             m
                            t                                              door    i
                            e                                             door    r
                            r                                              door   e
                           perimeter perimeter perimeter perimeter p
GROUNDGROUNDGROUNDGROUNDGROUNDPAVEMENTGOURNDGROUNDGROUND
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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 9:42:00 PM
    This is an interesting form. Clever and well written. I suppose congratulations are in order!!Asavvy1

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Juli. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:18:00 AM
    congrats on your win Juli.

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poem!!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 6:28:00 PM
    Congrats, Juli. Excellent. Very clever. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 6/14/2012 5:38:00 PM
    JULI, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 3:27:00 PM
    A house of cards with much deep walls... I like the way you writel... Michael

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 11:42:00 AM
    welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle
    Date: 1/3/2012 6:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you if you want you can look at more of peoms
  1. Date: 12/2/2011 8:46:00 PM
    OKay, So I've tried everything and the right perimeter for the house won't format right, even though on the edit screen it looks fine :( Sorry bout that =Juli-Michelle=

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 2:27:00 PM
    * "I Love Fun Sweet Poem * My Dear Beautiful Juli-Michelle * Such A Precious Heart Would Craft Something As Adorable As This * Knock Knock Knock * Tis Your Beauty Home * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *

    Michelle Avatar Juli- Michelle
    Date: 12/2/2011 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You Sarah! <3 =Juli=Michelle=