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Regrettably Stagnant

stagnant I lay…
zealously yearning 
yet reluctant to play

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    Christine Ueri
    Date: 3/17/2012 2:02:00 AM
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    I agree with Andrea below, what a great haiku! Congratulations on your win, Natalie.
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    kash poet
    Date: 3/16/2012 4:06:00 AM
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    An excellent haiku by you Natalie.Congrats on your win!
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/15/2012 8:53:00 PM
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    Natalie, what an excellent way to do a haiku. it's not concrete, but the IDEAS are so COOL, we cannot help but be impressed. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 3/15/2012 3:59:00 PM
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    Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 3/15/2012 2:05:00 PM
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    What a thought provoking little poem! Well done, Natalie!!
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 3/15/2012 1:50:00 PM
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    congrats Natalie on a brilliant win for quality lines of poetic art luv..
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 3/15/2012 12:59:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 3/15/2012 11:49:00 AM
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    congrats. on your special win, hugs,vie
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/14/2011 6:19:00 AM
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    Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Natalie. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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    Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 12/9/2011 12:48:00 PM
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    Back again. Natalie, I sent my picks for the year-end awards via soupmail.
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    Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 12/8/2011 11:46:00 PM
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    Are you referring to not wanting to get into the haiku "game"? Natalie, very clever haiku nonetheless. Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's contest! I dig the layout too. Hey, why don't you re-post your awards blog? Simply copy/paste your 1st posting.
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/8/2011 11:36:00 PM
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    Good thinking here.Yes, all of us perhaps feel this time to time.Congrats on your win.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/8/2011 11:35:00 PM
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    HI, Natalie. it's good to see you on the winners' list. I sure remember this one! Congratulations.
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    Charlotte Puddifoot
    Date: 12/8/2011 4:48:00 PM
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    congrats on your win, I think we all feel like this from time to time...the rhyme works well, who says haiku shouldn't rhyme?
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 12/8/2011 4:30:00 PM
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    Sounds melancholy. Congrats on your win,Natalie! Kim
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/8/2011 4:01:00 PM
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    awww this doesn't sound happy!! too bad I couldn't tickle YOU! Congrad's Light & Love [I know I should talk..but I'm perking up!]
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 12/8/2011 1:19:00 PM
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    Oh shucks, I feel this way at times, too Natalie! You sure brought that across in your haiku-- Super congrats on your win and thank you for dropping by my poems :) also sorry i wasn't able to come up with something for your contest-- I had drowning in chocolate in mind but couldn't write it :(...
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    David Williams
    Date: 12/8/2011 12:24:00 PM
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    Natalie congrats on your win, bet this is the opposite of you..David
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/8/2011 11:06:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your placement in Cyndi's "Creativity" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
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    Broken Butterfly
    Date: 12/6/2011 4:47:00 AM
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    This is really wonderful. Natalie.. It makes one stop and think. And I think I do this far too much. Fear is my reluctance. Thank you Natalie for my placement in your Die A Fun Death Contest. That was for sure a fun contest to enter.
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    Black Eyed Susan
    Date: 12/5/2011 8:09:00 AM
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    i know what you mean - and really people could interpret this in so many different areas of their lives. Sometimes I'm like this in a social setting, though sitting instead of lying down. I love how this rhymes :) great flow.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/2/2011 9:16:00 PM
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    It sounds like you are some instrument. So it is like a cool personification, natalie. Good one!
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    iolanda Scripca
    Date: 12/2/2011 4:47:00 PM
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    You - stagnant, me - stagnant too! :0) Great free Haiku here, dear Natalie...I watched your Youtube video. Are you enjoying your new car? It must've been so exciting to be on TV and win! What was the process though? Did you start in Las Vegas?
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    jack horne
    Date: 12/2/2011 2:27:00 PM
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    I love this witty piece, Natalie. Many congrats to you too, my friend : )
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    Edward McCormick
    Date: 12/2/2011 10:07:00 AM
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    Fabulous! I love that it's only 2 lines, and I am totally enamoured with the rhyme in it... You really are a Rogue Rhymer, Natalie. Bravo, Viva Regrettably Stagnant! ~ECMc
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/2/2011 7:27:00 AM
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    Reads like a winner..Enjoyed..Thanks for the visit to my blog..My spirit bubbles over with youth waiting to be freed from the disabled weighty earthly tabernacle that holds it down..Thanks again for the visit..I hope that you have entered my contest "Song Of Solomon"..Just a few notes to read to do an entry..Sara
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 12/1/2011 11:28:00 AM
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    love the sense of polarity here, nats.. ulta nice!... best to you and hugggs!
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 11/29/2011 8:07:00 PM
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    enjoyed reading! I guess I will never fully understand a haiku
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    Tony Lane
    Date: 11/29/2011 5:51:00 PM
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    I like it when they rhyme.
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    Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
    Date: 11/29/2011 5:01:00 PM
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    Thanks Carolyn :) I feel so rebelious that it's only two lines AND it rhymes! I may learn to likes these after all. .. Maybe.
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