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Lui

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Lui

The night was young 
                 but the moon       waned
His breath I could feel
       across           my          neck
His words were like a spell
          h  
             y 
                 p
              n
          o
              t
                i
             c     
 leaving me heart beating WiLdLy
His touch as soft as silk
Long c.a.l.l.o.u.s.e.d fingers trailed d
                                                       o
                                                       w
                                                       n my back
His lips were cherry sweet, 
pressedagainstmine.

My body seared in heat,
my breaths were u   ne      v    e               n
as he moved in me

I felt a sharp       SHOCK , 
a surge of pleasure and pain 
filled me.

The night went on .....................
and so did our adventures.

His face I held in my hands: his fingers buried in my hair.

He was a f      et
                   le      ing dream,

a lost affair.
My lover, my best friend.
Condemned for his actions.

I sleep here:
 in the arms of another man.
The pain I feel, I clench my teeth
 always thinking it was him instead.

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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 5:37:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Genevieve. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol