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Sea of Dreams

I dreamt in sweetest slumber
By the white moon’s soft glow
I was adrift upon a crystal sea of blue
Such ethereal beauty shrouded in sapphire hues
The stars around me danced all along their celestial path
as across waves of sparkling light I did gently flow
Down, down, down the sea of tranquility  
through the night I did sail
across the endless heavens drifting upon a gentle breeze
until dawn meet me, and brought me home from my celestial seas

Contest: 1-14 Lines 
 For: Brian Strand 




inspired by the contest Moonlight Dreams by
Tracie   Indigo Dream Weaver

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:02:00 PM

    Lori,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 10:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "1-14 Line" contest Lori. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 5:26:00 PM

    Congratulations Lori on your success with this wonderful drifting dream...Cheers Margaret

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 2:26:00 PM

    Lori..a relaxing wave of ahhhhhhhhh. Congrats on this very awesome win. This is just grand. You have penned one of the best with the last couple lines. Much enjoyed. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 1:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win x

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 5:22:00 PM

    congrulations, I see this one got placed. Did it win with Brian? It's gorgeous!

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 4:15:00 PM

    Lovely poem you have penned Lori smooth as the waves of the sea, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 9:45:00 AM

    Congrats...A beautiful write Best regards, Jon

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 8:39:00 AM

    Very nice write Lori. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 6:43:00 AM

    Reminded me Of Peter Pan's Neverland! I wanted to be on the boat with you! Congrad's Light & Love