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Shooting Star

A wayward star has lost it's place
Amidst the vastness known as space
Too close to earth it's path did lead
This shooting star for us to see

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  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:08:00 PM

    Daniel, , first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! About this poem: a very lovley poem... thank you for sharing...p.d.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 5:49:00 AM

    I like the subject, and what you are saying, was let down by that last dodgy rhyme, nice try