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Stargazing

Day gives way to night 
The darkening skies
Come alive

Magic flecks across the dark
Twinkling to their tune
Music unsung

A canvas built on dreams
Vibrating with wishes
Secrets told

Glimpsing into the unknown 
Neither here nor there
Just being


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  1. Date: 2/24/2012 6:23:00 PM
    Hi...Shannon... how are you?? STAR gazing..lol... By the rate you are going when it comes to the soup...i say you won't get this till another month... lol..major joke... ha ha..thank you for finally answering my question... weeeee;-) You should write something... if you don't I will come back and bother you... you know..this is a very beautiful poem... read it already... but,, oh well... stopping by to say hi really..always..pd

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 8:35:00 AM
    I rather enjoyed this one :-)

  1. Date: 1/11/2012 5:05:00 PM
    Interestingly enough, for me, it is during my hours of stargazing, especially when doing so from my hottub out back, that I get most of my inspiration for future poems. This is very nicely worded and arranged. And, is more than "just being".

  1. Date: 1/5/2012 1:30:00 PM
    thankxxx Shannon for these words so mesmerizing.. and for the luv and inspirational comments on blogs... appreciate warm friendship found with u here luv..

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 10:27:00 PM
    Dear Shannon, Amazing POETRY, so visual the night Landscape of the sky, I bow to YOUR Perfection. Wishing YOU and YOURS a very Merry Christmas and a Happy, Healthy, and Prosperous New Year LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 9:09:00 PM
    Hello Shannon,,, where are you sweetie. just wondering.. Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

  1. Date: 12/9/2011 9:56:00 PM
    * "HELLO, MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL SHANNON * I SENT YOUR LOVELY BEAUTY A SOUP REPLY *.* BEAUTIFUL * THIS WONDERFUL STAR GAZERS POE * I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT * I FEEL LIKE A FLUTTERING BUTTERFLY * THANK YOU FOR YOUR SWEET VISIT * ALWAYS A JOY * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 7:33:00 AM
    Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 7:59:00 AM
    awesome writing Shannon:) I`ll be stargazing tonight..Hug,Arild

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 3:34:00 PM
    * "Thank You Dear Shannon * I Appreciate Your Kind Visit & Comment * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 9:10:00 AM
    * "I Love Everything About This Beauty * My Dear Sweet & Owww Sooo Beautiful Shannon * 'A Canvas Built On Dreams * Vibrating With Wishes * Secrets Told * Just Being' * Stirs My Spirit Extremely Deeply Inside & All I Can See Is Your Precious Beauty * Sooo Lovely * My Beautiful Luv * Always & Forever Beyound * 'Your Sarah.'" *

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 8:46:00 AM
    Sweet Stargazing Introspective... ...I guess this is for the sighted such a universal delight; stargazing invokes a sundry of thoughts in our species.