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Burning Bullet

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Burning Bullet

Burning Bullet

         As a aromatic substance,
 burning like a coolwater incense.
     Keeping them in suspense.
  I'm a queen I come with my own swarm of bees.
    From throwing rocks to carring glocks.
   I'm cocking my clip for the new verse that I spit.
          Tearing them apart, ripping hearts.
           Spilting heads laying them to bed.
  My mouth is like a pistol, it shoots pitiless missile's.
             You must not know about me.
            I bring the heat any where I be.
    To the left, to the left, a bullet staright to the chest.
    This is my profession, I'm the one who professes!
                       Burning Bullet...
    To true to the game, my style burning like a flame.
     Keeping it gully from beginning to the end.
                I love being empty within.
       Drop the act, you'll stay a hood rat!
 Why are you going through my fam like a photographic cam.
                I'm a burning bullet...
      Just to fantastic, personalitiy is magnetic.
            Life style is justifiable justice,
           to a journey to how I live this!
   Coming up poor, to getting rich making them feel foolish.
                 A long lived existence....
                   a burning bullet!

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:48:00 PM
    I see that this is your first poem. You did a great job. Thanks for sharingand for reading my poems. welcome to the Soup. Lucilla

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 3/13/2013 5:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes I wrote this a long time ago...thank you for reading. :)
  1. Date: 6/21/2012 2:42:00 PM
    Good work, great flow.Keep your pen working and the ink flowing..... Ox oX

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 3/13/2013 5:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :)
  1. Date: 6/19/2012 8:42:00 AM
    You went BROOKLYN STYLE HERE I SEE....HMMM YOUR MORE LIKE A BURNING TAMALE....

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 6/19/2012 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lmaooo!!! you silly...lol
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
    Nice piece here!!

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 5/18/2012 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Pace :)
  1. Date: 12/6/2011 3:50:00 PM
    Excellent Poetry, your are a Poet I will now keep up with... very enjoyed.. Michael

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 12/14/2011 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow! thank you Michael apprecate all of your comments you have posted... :)
  1. Date: 12/1/2011 12:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Twanna. Love, Carol

    Irisha Avatar twanna Irisha
    Date: 12/5/2011 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww thanks :)
  1. Date: 11/21/2011 7:30:00 PM
    The flow of this is astounding. Good work!