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Discharged

                                        Discharged by the moon
                            I reached the peak of my energy tonight
                                        The moon is fading now
                                           And so is my writing
                                       Tender kisses I imagined
                                          Love in every human
                                 Cared for each and every one of you

                                      Discharged by the moon
                                  Letter from a dried out writer
                            Now I can only wait for it to awaken again
                      My soul is ripped apart,scattered all over the place
                             I want it so bad,but it aint there no more
                              I`m a ghostrider,defeated by the moon
                      My silhuette does no longer appear on the horizon

                                   A glass of wine might do the trick
                                     After all..it is Saturday though
                                     Can you hear my desperation?
                                      I would do anything for you,
                                 if you gave me back my inspiration
                               So brutally swept away from my path
                              So vivid in mind,but so far out of reach


About this poem: halfway into the writing of it,my inspiration came to a complet stop.After I talked with a good friend,(not about the poem) EUREKA!! there I had the idea/inspiration to finish it..strange that,isnt it?

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:33:00 AM
    such a inspirational write Arild, like to see your first here on soup.......

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Hi Arild back agaian but i find myself drawn by your great writing loved this on to, will be abck again for sure, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 12:02:00 PM
    Reads like a case of writer's block turned "rite". =)

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Awesome poem and I'm glad you were inspired to write it! "So vivid in mind but so out of reach" Oh, how I can relate to that, and it is sooooooooooooooo frustrating for me! Excellent one - loved every word! :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 2/16/2012 2:06:00 PM
    Interesting line "My soul is ripped apart, scattere all over the place"..I hope that your soul is not torn and scattered...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 1/31/2012 3:44:00 PM
    I like the thought processes behind writing this poem as well as the poem, Arild...it's so true..just step away from a writing lull and something out there will energize u...even an old friend with kind energetic words...I got inspiration from some bizarre shopping experience last week..all these colorful long ostrich feathers..there they were dancing in the flourescent light waiting to be touched! Yes...great tho'ts..Love, GWendolen

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Arlid, wow...imagine that discharged from the moon,,, what a modern way to warm our imaginations with inspiration... a sweet romantic way to reach your hearts desire... enjoyed totaly...always,..p.d

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 9:37:00 AM
    Suggest a hearing of some Hector Beriioz - Symphonie Fantastique or Romeo and Juliet. It works, especially with a fine bottle of vino on the table. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 11:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Arild. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 9:30:00 PM
    I like it, namaste~N

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 10:31:00 PM
    wow, it's funny how those things happen, what you said in your note. congratulations on finishing your awesome poem. btw, you asked for sweet romance recipe. It is given in better detail if you type in my poem "Indelible by andrea dietrich"!

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 4:26:00 PM
    In time you will tap into your fountain once again dear one, have no fear you aren't finished yet, there is still words left unsaid, continue your journey, if you run out of ideas just look up to a wonderful sky God has created just for your imagination. Love,Vie

  1. Date: 11/22/2011 10:01:00 AM
    Thanks for great feedback Dr.Ram Mehta:) You`ve got a impressive collection of writing! Where do you find the words..?:-)

  1. Date: 11/22/2011 5:37:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Arild. I am sorry to be late welcoming you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 9:04:00 PM
    Fantastic expressions, quite impressive write, Arild