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  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:52:00 PM
    Wow, such a painful poem of loss. Very expressive poem. Good job!

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 6:45:00 PM
    Oh I like this very much,, soft and tender ;}

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 2:10:00 PM
    Tender write, Dr Ram. Many congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 10:39:00 AM
    So lovely, Dr. Ram, and your poem eminates with love. I wonder if there was a real Indian folk story or legend upon this was based. Best wishes in Rick's contest! I see you wrote another sedoke and I'll check it out. Very nice work here. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 8:16:00 AM
    I was just daydreaming about the dag that I get tl meet you....Smile, Ahhhh!:) ~

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 8:03:00 AM
    wow, a very powerful poem at the end of it, with good images,Dr. Ram. I really like this one.

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:45:00 AM
    a tender and sad love song. very nicely done. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:28:00 AM
    Strong write Dr. Ram....Michael

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:27:00 AM
    No! I already Know whatYour about!? ~ John:)