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An Indian Song

Where are your pale hands?
Who lies under your smart spell?
Oh, where are you now?...
Your soft gentle touch
The hot blood rushed through my veins...
Until you waved me farewell.

Pale hands, pink tipped as
Lotus that float on water
Where we used to live and love.
I would rather wish
To feel you around my throat
Crushing me, than wave farewell.

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  1. Date: 12/13/2011 6:45:00 PM

    Oh I like this very much,, soft and tender ;}

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 2:10:00 PM

    Tender write, Dr Ram. Many congrats on all your wins : )

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 10:39:00 AM

    So lovely, Dr. Ram, and your poem eminates with love. I wonder if there was a real Indian folk story or legend upon this was based. Best wishes in Rick's contest! I see you wrote another sedoke and I'll check it out. Very nice work here. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 8:16:00 AM

    I was just daydreaming about the dag that I get tl meet you....Smile, Ahhhh!:) ~

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 8:03:00 AM

    wow, a very powerful poem at the end of it, with good images,Dr. Ram. I really like this one.

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:45:00 AM

    a tender and sad love song. very nicely done. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:28:00 AM

    Strong write Dr. Ram....Michael

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 7:27:00 AM

    No! I already Know whatYour about!? ~ John:)