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Environments Verse

Can a word be just a tree?
Is a forest any form of poetry?
Where the soil adds imagery of style,
Rains make the flow of each line.
Light the feeling that reader reacts too.
Warmth of summer the deep rich stanzas,
Winters frigid ways the ending of strength.

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  1. Date: 11/17/2011 9:13:00 PM

    Cecil, these are very creative metaphors. A clever verse for the environment! Kwansaba, huh? I don't think I have ever written one. (oh, line three has a typo. Use "adds") Luv, Andrea

    hickman Avatar cecil hickman Date: 11/17/2011 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Andrea for reading and especially for commenting and for the advice for the typo,,,Blessings..Cecil