snow peppers down by binibining P.iNk

kash poet

Date: 5/16/2013 7:22:00 PM

Hi nikko,I just cannot understand how you accessed my *my poems* page and shared it!If you are not logged in then clicking on the * my poem* page will lead to log in page and if you are already logged in then clicking on it will lead you to your * my poems* page.

nette onclaud

Date: 12/1/2011 12:36:00 AM

yehey, nikks.. so galeng.. i still have asthma kaya ingat.. ( do ako palagi dito kasi medyo naguguluhan ako sa kopya -kops ni ram.. inuulit na naman nya ngayon, yipers!).. ") huggs!

Chris D. Aechtner

Date: 11/30/2011 10:12:00 AM

Heya nikko. A big congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest! Excellent juxtaposition here, especially the clash of bright red on white. I was going to say something about how Cardinals migrate south for the winter, but guess wot? Some of them are staying now because the weather is all messed up.

kash poet

Date: 11/30/2011 3:06:00 AM

Very nice imagery here Nikko.Congrats on your win.

David Williams

Date: 11/30/2011 2:02:00 AM

Nikko congrats on your win, we don't have cardinals in UK, but have seen them in Aus..nice image..David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2011 10:47:00 PM

HI NIKKO;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful HAIKU..FOR DEBBIE~ Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2011 9:40:00 PM

I loved it then and I love it now. Congrats on this one, Nikko. How ARE you? And NOW I can recognize you in the avatar. hahaha

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/28/2011 10:35:00 AM

hey Missy, how you?? I had to laugh at your response to the nelly, kelly situation hehe ;) :D *mwahugs*

Gwendolen R.

Date: 11/26/2011 3:47:00 PM

cardinals are Ohio's state bird...the male camouflage pretty well in the summer, but beware...they stick out like a sore thumb against this blanket of snow....

Gwendolen R.

Date: 11/26/2011 3:45:00 PM

I like seeing our poetry in action...and the comments of Deb below...so what revising will arise from the Deb's advice????....STAY TUNED for another episode of.....AS NIKKO'S PEN CHURNS!!......(now, let's go to commercial break.........).

binibining P.iNk Date: 11/27/2011 11:38:00 AM

haha you are making me laugh silly here, Gwendolen, you're such a sweetie, please don't hold your breath though...I got churn the cream some more... I hope I can come up with a haiku as smooth as butter (haha wishful thinking!!) and thanks for the info, about those cardinals :D

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/26/2011 2:23:00 PM

nikki you need to use the articles [a,an, the] to have it make sense [snow peppers the sky] if you want to use [peppers] don't use [dusts] stick with 1 verb..now both lines are about the quality of the snow and there isn't much action and a dusty is a light snow and then you say [thick blanket] the switch to the red bird in/on the white snow is very nice..take another wack at it. Light & Love

binibining P.iNk Date: 11/27/2011 11:35:00 AM

uh-oh.... I see I am in trouble here... urrgh. Only 1 verb? But I can use articles (haha how ironic since I sometimes have a slew of them in my poems)...umm wack it? I shall see -- ohh, the bleeding drops of red!!! but ok I will see what I can do, thanks, Debbo--kidding, sweetie, I know you meant me as Nikko :D just me being a silly monkey yet again...O_o

kash poet

Date: 11/24/2011 6:21:00 PM

Yes miss ya here!!Beautiful haiku.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2011 11:38:00 AM

Nikko. just came here to say hi on this thanksgiving day here in the States. Miss ya here!! Hope you are not too tired and busy. And more prayers for your dear aunt. LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 8:49:00 AM

Oh, my , from eggs sunny side up to pepper now. HOW cool. I am glad I chanced on this one too, Nikko. Love your inventive haiku style.

JSLambert Chinaski domo-MR.ROBOTO

Date: 11/18/2011 12:55:00 AM

U R sWawesome! (so Awesome)

elizabeth wesley

Date: 11/17/2011 8:02:00 PM

It's one of the prettiest winter sights to see a cardinal against the snow. Loved the vision I see in this.

Catie Lindsey

Date: 11/17/2011 11:29:00 AM

very nice haiku, Nikko. :) Catie

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