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Wolf's Tongue

<                                  wolf tongue speaks at night
                                 search for prey has come to end ...
                                         howling escalates





Written by
Katherine Stella 11/16/11

Entry For
Deb Guzzi's Animal Haiku

I Chose The Wolf
My Home State
Is Minnesota
Wolf Pop Estimate 3020 Per D.N.R. 
Yikes

G.L. All

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  1. Date: 12/25/2011 10:46:00 PM

    Kat,, a great haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 5:58:00 PM

    hi there..you are trying to get too much into one haiku let the reader plump out the image in their own way..in their mind..most of a haiku is in the readers mind not the writers words, also there is only 1 focus here, 2 parts is the goal..say the 2 joined lines are about the wolf line 3 the juxtaposition can be about the prey..try again [using the same concept] light & love soup mail

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 12:34:00 AM

    KAT, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR POEM,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:44:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading this great work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Sara