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Swirling

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Below is the poem entitled Swirling which was written by poet Jacque Graham. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Swirling

Swirling, twirling, whirling
Around, and around, and around
Till the world spins even when I'm still

Jumping, skipping, hopping
Up and down and up again
Till the ground doesn't exist

Swimming, flipping, diving
Up, down, around every which way
So that gravity and direction mean nothing

How can I change the way the world looks today?

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  1. Date: 1/6/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Jacque, So active and alive are your words! I like the pace of this poem. It inspires me to give the free verse a try. Also, thanks for commenting on my poem. It means a lot to me as a new poet. Have a most creative day! Theresa

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 2:30:00 PM
    This is excellent and perfectly crafted to bring out the meaning as glaring as possible. I love this piece!