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love is something else

I love you ,i too everybody says
But why deceiving each other by many different ways
Love has become the slogan of the days
but our hearts are empty of feelings and prays

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  1. Date: 11/26/2011 11:34:00 AM

    Well done! keep it up!

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 5:53:00 AM

    check forms of poetry Rizwan.

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 2:25:00 AM

    RIZWAN, YOU got that right.... love is like the one ultimate element that can't be really really described... I mean we can share all the motions and describe how it feels... but at the end... we really can't describe it.. with out the existence.. of words.. a slogan..i love that line... and one can love and still feel empty.. lol.. you see i can't really describe it.. thank you.. for the thought... sending soup mail...p.d.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 8:58:00 PM

    Very deep Rizwan, thanks for the comments.