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Erotic Fantasy- A Product Of Teenage Infatuation-Experience of a girl

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Erotic Fantasy- A Product Of Teenage Infatuation-Experience of a girl

Gently lying on my bed with my slickly Pink Pajamas, I fell asleep like a peaceful baby, then the windows opened in complete excitement, and the seas breezed in like a stampede, raising my night dress from legs to Breasts leaving me nude, cold but blessed, then came this guy with a bad intention crested on his chest, I could not picture his face but could see him so well. As his tongue kiss and lick, high voltage current crossed my cheek. the wet flexible muscle moved quite oblique, then every action from now on seem to click, causing sensation so quick, I suddenly became helpless, weak and sick. He trade his plight on site, causing hormonal sparks to ignite, not considering if he is wrong or right, becoming more real and clean in my sight, my increasing arousal, making the moment bright. His groans made the feeling mutual, producing pleasure beyond the normal ritual, and making his movement on me so casual, cupped my Breast to make the feeling factual, squeezing them like a newly baked dough, wheezing sounds emerging from my passionate screams, and making my freezing feet jerk as he plays with the nipples. Then down the road he goes to my shin, spreading my legs made the sensation immeasurable, the gradual heat from his romancing hand, simply unspeakable, summed up with his commanding domination like a constable, began an erotic scene so irresistible, and since I am already grossly susceptible, I yielded to his masculine touch as though already compatible. Steadily and slowly, he drives through to my thighs like a convertible, causing a body rhythm and sensation so explicable. Caressing them gently as I wished, reaching the focal point made me feel accomplished, hoping to treat my secret garden with a mood so selfish, making it his possession and ecstasy fully nourished, complimented with a fantasy already established As he was about penetrating like a beam, I already reached the next level and ready to swim, as real as this experience may seem, I immediately woke up to realize it was just a dream

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  1. Date: 2/14/2014 10:30:00 AM
    Working with kids for the past 40 years, I found it almost unanimous, there is a tendency for young girls to fall for the bad guy, the badder the better. This one depicts that fantasy fairly well. Most girls outgrow it when they become women, but some never do.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 2/14/2014 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yeah! Its typical of women. Thanks a lot Vince... You just made my valentine! Thanks for all your comments
  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:35:00 PM
    Enjoyed you're erotic write Funom xxx

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 1/12/2014 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mystic Rose
  1. Date: 4/22/2013 3:03:00 AM
    ouuuuuch!! it is 100 percent poetic.

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 4/22/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Lucas
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:53:00 AM
    Loved this erotic fantasy. I, too, have had dreams like this. And now that I am as old as J. Alfred Prufrock, these dreams have been increasing lately. Very enjoyable read!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/23/2013 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot stark hunter
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:59:00 AM
    Funom, vividly real and erotic, I love it..David

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/11/2012 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks David Williams
  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:17:00 AM
    sheeeshhhh!!!!

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 6/11/2012 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    is it cool?
  1. Date: 6/6/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Thanks a lot The Scribe

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 10:47:00 AM
    Good write, u have here. I liked it a lot!

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 4:48:00 AM
    Thanks a lot Blake

  1. Date: 6/5/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Wow 0.o That was awesome >.> Crazy awesome