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The Maiden of My Love

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Gliding joyfully through pleasures dens place; adorned afresh in her lovely bareness

Natures sweet child; the lady of my dreams this woman that, I adore; such purity 

Lying afore the fireshearth parting, her long silkened legs; she always knows...

Softly with a smile and her breast, rising amid this familiar desire; her beauty ~

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...“The Maiden, of My Love” *

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:25:00 AM

    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 1:22:00 PM

    Very Romantic an sensual Sarah x :) Thank you for passing through with your Lovely comment xx

     Avatar Date: 12/25/2011 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * . . "I LOVE YOU, BABY" . . *
    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin Date: 12/7/2011 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    P.s You have such beautiful words thank you for passing by x **^_^**Sarah :) x Dawnie x
  1. Date: 12/5/2011 9:40:00 AM

    Cool poem :D short but wonderful ;)

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 12:31:00 PM

    Such a warm tribute to romance , im such a romatic and i loved reading this . Thank you romantic Sarah , just thank you xx

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 8:47:00 AM

    Your words are romantic and captivating in there sensuality. Very nice. Careyanna

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 6:30:00 PM

    Mona Lisa, girl! Mona Lisa!

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:54:00 PM

    softly sensual with lines that flow in fluid motion and mood... lovely, sara! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 8:59:00 PM

    Wow Sarah, the description is great. Thanks for such lovely comments. I love it. God Bless.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 3:01:00 PM

    Your eyes seem to see nothing but beauty what else can she see when she is made only of thee. Love and light dear one, Vie

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 10:29:00 AM

    You paint an exquisite story all with vivid and captivating words...stunning...luv shannon

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:53:00 AM

    Sensituve, intimate portrait, sarah, Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:31:00 AM

    Goodness, Sarah, this is quite the image you have painted for us. Fire crackling and all. :) Catie

     Avatar Date: 12/29/2011 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * . . "I SHOULD HAVE KISSED YOUR BEAUTIFUL LIPS LIKE THIS * A LONG TIME AGO * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV!!" *
     Avatar Date: 12/29/2011 7:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * "THE MOST BEAUTIFUL IMAGE OF ALL WHICH I CAN ENVISION * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL CATIE * WOULD BE MAKING LOVE TO YOU * AFORE THE FIRESPLACE * PURE BEAUTY MY LUV." *