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canopy of leaves

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canopy of leaves

canopy of leaves
covers golden mango bunch...
rustle of bat wings



*kigo is mango-- these are basically summer fruits, oh yumm




--for Charles' Strictly Haiku contest :)


11082011

**thank you to everyone who gave their insights and helped 
me decide what to enter :)



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  1. Date: 11/16/2011 11:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 1:19:00 PM
    And look at this gem I found and some how missed. Congrats on this simply beautiful write. Hugs across the world to you xox. Michael

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 9:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Enjoyed reading ...Sara

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 2:38:00 PM
    ohhh yeah! go nikko GO very nice congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 5:43:00 PM
    oh nikko what a cute winning haiku, it was a tough contest...thanks so much for your uplifting words :-)

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 10:39:00 AM
    Congratulations Nikko on your win in Charle's contest.Loved it.

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 7:52:00 AM
    Nikko, congratulations on your 4th place win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 12:18:00 AM
    THIS IS BEYOND LOVELY... LOVE IT NIKKO... I THINK I BOUGHT A MANGO THEOTHER DAY... AND I DID NOT KNOW HOW TO EAT IT...LOL.. BESIDES WITH MY MOUTH... AND HOW DID YOU KNOW IT WAS MY KIDS BIRTHDAY.... I WAS WONDERING.... MISS.WATTS...LOL... I CALLED ANDREA... Mrs..HOLMES... I SEE CONGRATS IS IN ORDER.... TAKE CARE,..P.D.

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:25:00 PM
    Congrats Nikko on a special win for a spectacular Haiku sweetie friend..luv..

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 8:15:00 PM
    Glad to see you went with the one I liked better, Nikko. For me it was a truly deserved top win!! congratulations!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 2:13:00 PM
    Wow, Nikko. My lil BAT just keeps getting more and more famous!! Now he has won his very first poetry contest!! Good thing he never woke up from your mango tree or you would have had to write about something different! lol. You nailed this one the first time around, darlin...and didn't need any help...Keep that pen moving..Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 1:41:00 PM
    Mmmmm , how I love mangos....(and how clever to think of the bats as your last line! well done, dear Nikko !!!

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 1:20:00 PM
    thank you for entering in my contest. You did very well with a 4th place.

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 8:56:00 PM
    Glad you chose this one Nikko. I think you have a winner here. Good use of imagery and alliteration. I'm glad my input was helpful. Karen

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 1:02:00 AM
    Very nice.It will do good in the contest I think.In India also mango is a very popular summer fruit.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 12:57:00 AM
    Nice artistic Haiku, my friend. Enjoyed it. Best of luck for contest. bl