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It's a promise

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It's a promise


              It's a promise 

Every moment,
with every single breath I take,
it's a new promise,
new chance,
to make.
To make it  better,
then one before,
before yesterday.

Every morning,
after I open my eyes,
there is one more hope
for us,
one new start.
So,
what should,
or could,
I do today?
that is better,
and different
then yesterday,

So,
please ,
you....... tell me......
Weld a heart out of steel,
for you,
I can do that.......
Build a steel cage,
to cage my self in,
I can do that......
To live for you,
make you laugh,
I can do that......
Die for you,
so you don't have to,
I can do that.......

but. don't ask me 
to leave you alone,
don't ask me that,
anything,
you may ask,
but ......


 


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  1. Date: 2/8/2013 10:56:00 AM
    A beautiful poem! It expressed the extreme steps of what individuals would do to capture another persons heart even though there is no guarantee that love one will stay. Have a beautiful weekend Simmplissity= Patricia Lewis

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Thank you Linda, and I will try as well as you,Take care,Ivy

  1. Date: 2/5/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Ismeta, :-) Congratulations with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent time here on the soup... I know I sure am. * or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA"

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 7:50:00 AM
    It makes me sad, the idea that one must sacrifice ones happiness to be happy... But so many people do it every day, and you captured the essence of it, so I like your poem. P.s. In the last section did you mean to say "leave" instead of "Live"? If not that is how I read it in my mind... :)

    vresk Avatar ismeta -Ivy vresk
    Date: 11/7/2011 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for your comment,and yes your right,it is suppose to be leave,not live,thank you ,one more time ,as people in my country say "two persons see and knows more than one",Ivy