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ILLUSIVE DREAM

I fell~ asleep
It was easy to fall*
I slipped~ into a dream
When I couldn't get a grip*
.           ***         .

I hate WHAT you did to me..
Inside are things you can't see..
WHAT! 
Do you want me to PRETEND a smile?
I think I'll stay in my slumber of denial..

Like a pack of candy,
you where excited to open me up!
After a while you kept your mouth shut.
This Love Label came with NO WARNING sign.
WHAT happen to cloud nine?

Secretly you ended this.
With one broken KISS!
In the back of my mind when I close my eyes..
My thoughts are still searching for that one surprise..
A piece of puzzle in the making, 
The piece that will clear up my skies...

I can't live my life in peace...
Knowing my heart was filled up with your disease...
Like a dreamer you made me fall into deep...
Now I'm lost in a realm of sleep..
This dream has not expired,
I'm overdue when it comes to counting sheep..

This is only a bad dream?
Wake me up! 
Hear me scream!
WHAT! I'm not screaming?
Come on, I got to be dreaming! 
WHAT! 
Do you mean this isn't a dream?

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  1. Date: 5/2/2013 4:20:00 PM

    Great piece of work here. Kinnycut

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:42:00 PM

    that's a great poem. i loved it. you're really good. XD

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:51:00 AM

    Dearest Four leaf little clover, I love the alive,the fire,in you.Every word you shine,it is like a tiger,a defiance waiting to be found.Never ever let someone put out that light,because surely,you would shine,like diamonds,within the emptiness of night.God bless you,Dearest Skat,xoxo,Tracy.

    Windisch Mason Avatar Tracy Marie Windisch Mason Date: 3/9/2013 1:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And you are 10.
  1. Date: 1/23/2013 4:10:00 PM

    Great poem girl. We all have a right to dream and make some dreams become real. You might want to read- Just A Woman. I hope you are doing good Sidney. Take care and God bless you. Lucy

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:30:00 AM

    Wonderful!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 12:26:00 AM

    Wow this a jungle of a write Skat; I Know however you will come out on top..!Thank you for the new year wishes.." Joe..)

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:57:00 AM

    I LOVE IT .KEEP IT UP.

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 6:43:00 AM

    Wow, Sidney this is powerful and one hell of an awesome poem... you are so illusive, a mystery i think, one sweet lady that is needed here............

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 11:32:00 AM

    I'm blushing that you called me a "fav" poet !! xoxo thank you!!! Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:40:00 PM

    I love dialogue poems such as this. Your verses come alive as I read them. It's time you started living a new dream. The one where someone loves you the way you deserve to be loved.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 4:59:00 PM

    Very powerful first lines....like opeing paragraph of a great book...I enjoyed reading thru. Irish

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:44:00 PM

    I like the anger you expel through this poem. This is a very nicely written poem. I especially like the end. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/20/2011 7:44:00 AM

    This poem is so deep and meaningful. I know this feeling Sidney. Thank you for my placement in you Any New/Old Haiku contest.

  1. Date: 11/19/2011 4:36:00 PM

    Hiya Sid, thanks for stopping by...I especially love the line 'I'm overdue when it comes to counting sheep' I have that problem a lot...your sis knows me so she can fill you in if you both like...luv shannon

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 11:02:00 PM

    oh and belated happy birthday to one of your kids? Who??

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 11:01:00 PM

    Ok so who actually wrote this??? I'm thinking Irma??? Wait...I think I am still in a dream where Skat aka Sidney actually said hi to me and said something like Irma said I was in a chocolate frenzy,... o_o chococococonfused heehee kidding- I think that was Sidney really saying hi so pls say Hi back to her for me, ok, Irma? Thanks! & you wrote this.

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 10:36:00 PM

    NO.. ANDREA... MY SISTER SIDNEY WAS JUST STOPPING BY TO SAY HI LAST NIGHT... GEES... SHE USED MY ACCOUNT.. NOW HOW HARD IS THAT TO ACCEPT.. LOL...

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 10:13:00 PM

    Good one, Sydney(?) I used to call SKAT as Irma,that's why I am confused. Hey, thanks for that win on the shoes limerick. It's been so long, I almost forgot i wrote it.hahaha. Luv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 5:20:00 PM

    Oh no! like the bad dream of falling but hitting the ground BEFORE you wake up! Thanks for your placement in Shoes , Skat. Have a great one.

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 1:03:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work..If this was for the contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..I am honored that you selected my work to be in the winner's list..Thanks for choosing it..Sara

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 12:10:00 PM

    just making my rounds,,,what a wonderful write,,sometime i think this is not a dream,,,relationships are so hard.....great to read your poems again...

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 9:18:00 AM

    Hey S.K.A.T. u have made my day brighter with this fantastic write of yours and my first place win in Shoes ..many thankxx ..much appreciation.. this poem I can relate to so much.. we all have stresses in family..in luv..in life.. I miss u much... how is baby Ezzelle? so cute and cuddly at this stage of life.. best wishes to Royal and everyone.. u are loved and missed much my friend...always...your BFF...

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 5:35:00 AM

    Very nice to be reading you today Skat... dream and reality are so close ....Michael

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 11:16:00 PM

    thanxs everyone! I'll catch U all on a later day LOVE~ SIDNEY

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 9:58:00 PM

    pretty much so