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Sunset Haiku Trio

bright rays of yellow
ride the rolling ocean waves. . . .
sun is hanging ten

sun spreads marmalade
on a toasty warm evening. . . . 
the sky eats it up

day ends at the beach
twilight spills orange delight
onto the water

Written for PD's
SUNSET (( HAIKU )) Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 2/15/2012 3:03:00 PM

    Hi Andrea.. I judged my contest today but could not find your entry luv.. did u enter? I was so upset not to see a poem I know u wrote right? well pleaser let me know what hapened ..please.. thankxxx..luv..

  1. Date: 12/4/2011 4:07:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that I chose this one for the descriptive lines brought me to the beach in summer..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 11:15:00 AM

    Just where I want to be on the beach at sunset instead of snow laden ground . love phyl

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 3:33:00 PM

    congrats on another contest win andrea! most impressive haiku trio, the second one is outstanding, toasty and tasty :-)

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 2:06:00 PM

    A veritable feast, dear Andrea. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 5:25:00 PM

    Congrats Andrea on a brilliant win with this incredible set of Haikus my friend.. awesome as always ..visual delights...luv..

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:23:00 AM

    Many congrats Andrea - a well deserved win - luv Janette

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:35:00 AM

    Congrats my dear Andea.. a wonderful write and win for you....luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 6:18:00 AM

    Lovely Haiku's, congrats to you for your win in PD's contest...luv shannon

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 5:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 1:26:00 AM

    Awesome write,Andrea.Congratulations on your well deserved win....nice trio....

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 1:26:00 AM

    Andrea congrats on your win, love the idea of sun spreading marmalade, fantastic..David

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 10:18:00 PM

    Oh,...okay...Hang Ten, girl....I get it now. Thanks for the explanation. I think there used to be a clothing line or T shirt company named Hang Ten too. My poor memory is waning. I like your haiku entry bc u tried to touch on more than one thot and encompassed everything PD was throwing out there! I can always expect to be mentally stretched while reading your work...Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 9:55:00 PM

    Andrea~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 9:31:00 PM

    Such fun and inviting scenes in your triple dipple haiku, Andrea. What does hang ten reference? It sounds sooo familiar. Been very busy working and with skool...there are soooo many contests which is all these poets something fun to do. I can only enter a couple...don't even have time to post much. I will read more as time allows...great to read your work again. Luv, Gwendolen.

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 4:27:00 PM

    wonderful Haikus, Andrea, only back for five minutes, glad i caught these. love, harry

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 11:12:00 AM

    fantastic ideas and imagery! love them all! but if i had to pick a favorite, i would pick the 2nd one - sun like marmalade on toast. very creative! i bet pd will love these too :)

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 6:33:00 AM

    A delicious write for feast of mind Andrea.Best wishes in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 11:14:00 PM

    boo! Hi Andy, How r U? as 4 Me:-) I'm here at Irmas. Having a get 2gether with her daughter. I'm really stopping by 2 say hi. I miss some of U poets from the soup. You know she locked me out of her account. Secretly I have an account I stop by from time 2 time. 2 check up on my own personal poets. irma will never know what name I'm under. I'm keeping it that way. After all that slaving I did 4 her LMFAO. I got 2 run ' good luck in her contest. I'm only here for tonight. LOVE SIDNEY

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 3:02:00 PM

    Fantastic trio luv, my favorite is the middle one as it is just delicious. Love the imagery in the others too but the middle one is really unusual.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 12:41:00 PM

    sounds like a beautiful sight after a long day.

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 10:58:00 AM

    Way to go with this wipeout write Andrea..!

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 10:43:00 AM

    You sure rode off in the sunset with your haiku trio, Andrea -- these are all great, that first one's so unique and made me smile but I have to admit that 2nd one's my favorite! Oh yummmm~ marmalade skies and you went further with the toast-- that I think is just awesome! I hope this rises way Up high --see now I am laying it thick with the sun references haha-- hugs to you!

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 9:59:00 AM

    The first Haiku is beyond awesome! I agree with PD's statement of, "ride the rolling ocean waves...." and loving the image that it creates!" Great work Andrea!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 9:31:00 AM

    good morning andrea how are you doing this wonderful morning? Oooo, I love the trio haikus.. thanks for the support . Have yourself a lovely Sunday, take care, ;-),.. P.d.

    A  Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/6/2011 9:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    by the way I love that image of the sun riding the waves...
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  1. Date: 11/6/2011 8:27:00 AM

    lost in these luscious words of Haiku Andrea.. special thoughts ignite the photos given for this contest.. the last set is definitely for me luv.. beach and's all this trio ..good luck my friend on this happy Sunday...

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 7:38:00 AM

    And the winner is !!! the above masterpiece.... well done my sweet poet friend... You gave PD exactly what she wanted.... Beautiful Poetry....luv and hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 6:33:00 AM

    Lovely haiku, my friend. Many congrats on all your wins too : )

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 5:44:00 AM

    Andrea, first, thank you for your comments, sadly, the environment suffers now at a rate of 2/environment-protection-regulations/day removed by this congress....cigars all around in lobbyists backrooms....This haiku trio is the BEST haiku trio I have seen in my2+ yrs. on the soup! line 3 in the first one is awesome, along with my favorite, the 2nd. haiku! congrats ahead of time!! jimbo