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FEMME FATALE

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FEMME FATALE

You clipped my wings
You cured my flirt
You blinded my sight
From bevy of beauties.

I'm a toy in your palm
Administered unto your wish
And, like powerful Samson
I'm doomed!

Love,
Sweet bait
Covering a naked hook
The cemetary of my life. 

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  1. Date: 11/4/2011 11:42:00 PM
    wow! Very EPIC... love it... adding this to my favorites.... i have not read much of your poems,,, but, i love this one.. LINDA

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 6:25:00 AM
    very intersting point of view, nicely expressed, think I'd be inclined to add 'the' before 'bevy', just to help the language