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Pyrotechnic

Amber-blaze combustion: dazzling embers flare, golden hues igniting; jasper kindling lighting molten night; orange pyrotechnics quickening, rippling sparks, topaz undulations; Vesuvian wheatfields' xanthic yellow zeal.

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  1. Date: 7/14/2012 2:39:00 PM

    Nice descriptions, Charlotte, but why not some commentary. Surely, you do not mean ordinary fireworks.

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 7:57:00 AM

    i bet you don't wear glasses.

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 9:32:00 PM

    hey, I see you made the list Congratulations, Charlotte!

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 5:20:00 PM

    Congratulations Charlotte on your top ten win in this difficult contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 5:14:00 PM

    Excellent, Charlotte! You really created the image of the photo through your words. ABC is such a hard form, but you did an outstanding job with it. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 10:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Moses' sponsored contest "Natures Bounty" Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 10:30:00 PM

    Congrats Charlotte on an outstanding win for this amazing and profound ABC entry luv..

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 3:39:00 PM

    Wow, this poem surely reflects the title written for this write! Awesome word choices..."Golden Hues Igniting..."...perfect for this poem! Awesome work Charlotte!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 3:15:00 PM

    Very Electric Feel for this contest. I enjoy this one!

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 9:40:00 PM

    the title sure goes along with these fiery words, Charlotte! Some cool word choices in this one!

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 8:33:00 PM

    * “Sounds Like Close Encounters of The Third Kind * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Charlotte * So, How Do I Get There Unto The Mother Ship *.* Tis Always Extremely Nice Whenever I Cross Your Gifted Beauties Poetic Path * As I Was Saying Unto Another Beautiful Poetess Earliar * Your Fantastic Hearts Brush Covers A Vast Canvas of Colours * Very Lovely Beautiful Charlotte * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *