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Chocolate Covered Cherries

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Slowly tracing the milk chocolate softness, of her smooth velvet thighs

Lying upon her breast as she hugs gently, the pillow amid her sighs ~

Smiling in flavours of strawberries lingering, wetness; vanillas extract... 

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...“Chocolate Covered Cherries” *


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  1. Date: 11/3/2011 7:27:00 AM

    I like this Sarah, Thank you for the beauty Comment on my poem Slumber x Dawn

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 1:43:00 PM

    Oh,, I like this,, love chocolate covered cherries ;},,, thank you for your sweet comment on my "Won't You Be A Doll " ;}

     Avatar Date: 12/26/2011 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * "I ADORE & ABSOLUTELY LOVE * SWEET CHOCOLATE COVERED CHERRIES TOO * SOOO SOFT & CREAMY * AND * I LUV YOU * FOREVER * SARAH." *
  1. Date: 11/1/2011 11:27:00 PM

    Sensational......I can taste the sweetness of this poem...just 1 Cholocate Covered Cherry will do my heart good....LOVE IT

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 12:01:00 PM

    Your write like you invented sensuality dear one. Hugs from afar. Vie

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    ...."FOR, 'YOU BABY.'" *
  1. Date: 11/1/2011 9:26:00 AM

    Speechless to be honest...let me catch my breathe between lines...love reading every delicious word...when I come back for air I will be prepared to read more...love always and forever shannon

     Avatar Date: 12/25/2011 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * . . "THANK YOU BABY * MY LUV TO YOUR SWEET BEAUTY * ALWAYS & FOREVER TOO * 'YOUR SARAH.'" *
  1. Date: 11/1/2011 6:13:00 AM

    Sarah, thanks for reading my poem....your poem is erotic to start my day.... Have a cup of joe on me!! doris

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 5:27:00 AM

    I love chocolates!!Beautiful as you are :) Your poems are so deep..they make me happy ~ :D chocolate covered cherries!!oh..i love the title!!you are a piece of passion!!!i love you?

     Avatar Date: 12/27/2011 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    * "I LOVE YOU TOO * MY BEAUTIFUL LUV!!" *
  1. Date: 11/1/2011 3:37:00 AM

    ohhh, ohhh... this is magic in terms of sensory delight, sarah.. more! :) hugggs!

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 2:29:00 AM

    now I feel warm all over reading your cozy free verse.

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 7:38:00 PM

    this would be a wonderful entry in Franks erotica contest, wonderfully penned Sarah, and thank you for your kind comment

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 12:41:00 PM

    Interesting passionate work..Creativity at its finest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

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    * "Thank You * 'My Sweeet Luv.'" *