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Deep Sleep

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Deep Sleep

The sun peaking through my room, Scratching at my back. With it's heat, Melting through my sheet. Oh please, Oh please. I plead, Leaving no faze on the lights waking me. Defeated, Leering myself up. Toes lingering to the floor, Waiting for the touch to send chills up my legs. Surprised by the warm heat, Taking my defeat, To a more deep sleep.

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  1. Date: 11/28/2011 12:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Ed's "What makes you wake up each and everyday" contest Cali. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 11:02:00 PM

    I think this pretty much sums up how most of us feel. Return to reality. Bummer. Congratulations

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 9:13:00 PM

    Congrats on the win :o)

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 9:01:00 PM

    Congrats on first place Cali for this marvelous poetry luv..

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 1:31:00 PM

    A well done poem..p.d.

    Daniels Avatar Matt Daniels Date: 10/30/2011 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou.
  1. Date: 10/29/2011 6:08:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading..Very descriptive..Sara

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 3:03:00 PM

    Ha Ha..Gave ME a smile...Your works are outstanding also.