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Longing for You

I long for you each lone day passing
This empty space herein residing
For I can still feel your manly scent
Upon soft sheets, I refuse to vent

I seer you into this room present
Sadly fondling your vivid absence
For umteen days and nights, I await
For your return, rendering escape

Of the tortured mind of my sad state
How time goes by, so slowly awake
Bestowing your warm embrace, resigned
How long before loving lips meet mine?

How many moons must I gaze go by?
Through the darkness of this world so wide
Though my soul more bent, why do I hide?
From this blazing heart gone very wild?


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  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:39:00 PM

    Ah yes, "the tortured mind" is always a part of love. How we manage to survive the inebriated state of hopes and dreams that may or may not come to pass. It doesn't even expend enough calories to lose weight. How I enjoyed this tragic trip through the maze. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Suzanne , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:36:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your love loss work this eve..It was very expressive and emotive..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate your time spent there..Sara

  1. Date: 9/17/2012 2:11:00 PM

    SUZANNE, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 1:31:00 PM

    Suzanne..... Just too beautifully written. Love the way you have so expressed your feeling. And Congratulation on becoming a premium member.

  1. Date: 1/12/2012 5:31:00 AM

    Like this one Suzanne x

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 1:47:00 PM

    Glad to find you here.I was Bullbla on Lulu.

  1. Date: 11/30/2011 9:56:00 AM

    Just visiting again Suzanne, this can be read many times and alsays find a new thought to think about. Luv, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 2:26:00 PM

    So very moving...Love it !!! My heart goes out here perfectly. God Bless !!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2011 10:21:00 AM

    The waiting is so hard when one truly loves. Somehow the pain is so real for me and you expressed it so well. You have a large following of readers - so nice for you, hope you write more soon luv.

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 12:04:00 PM

    Long time I havent read such beautiful poems.Very impressive and touching lines! Wish you luck,Andrey Fisht.

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 7:19:00 PM

    It never goes smoothly my dear, experience is the best teacher and your words are so sad.

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:14:00 AM

    deep emotions in your poem. I enjoyed reading. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 8:43:00 PM

    Suzanne, i had this problem, on longing for a bit.. but, i escaped into a dream.. and there is no taking me out... I hate to think of what love really feels like... breathing someone is dangerous... lol... don't mind me.. your poem is awesome,,, take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 7:10:00 PM

    I feel as tho I miss him too...your emotions are penned so deeply in this emotive write. Great work..Gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/13/2011 5:43:00 AM

    Wonderful words Suzanne,and very well written.

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 4:40:00 PM

    Suzanne. time heals....my experience....but love never fades...love never fades...jimbo

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 12:56:00 PM

    To yearn for ones hearts to meet again, loving lips soon to touch, will relieve the pasts pains. This is a truly beautiful piece Suzanne :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 8:24:00 PM

    the longing presses on with this nostalgic melody, suzanne.. so well-scribed, it lingers on and on...! :) huggs

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 10:22:00 AM

    Thanks for your comment on one of mine, I figured i'd return the favor on this poem. Its really well written and artfully shows your hurt. Well Done

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 9:10:00 AM

    You came my way to read my work. That is greatly appreciated. :) This piece was remarkably painful. The anxiety & want has no bounds here. The way it should be. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 11/7/2011 1:14:00 AM

    hey Suzanne oh the pain until loving lips meet once more, well done, nicely executed, thanks for your comments..David

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 9:23:00 AM

    "How many moons must I gaze go by" - love that line...vivid longing portrayed so well. Thanks for visiting my work, thanks for sharing yours, sincerely, Ernest.

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 11:09:00 AM

    "Sadly fondling your vivid absence." This is strange, but a great image is presented. Welcome to the soup, Suzanne, and thanks for reading my stuff. daver

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 5:12:00 AM

    longing for your more poems,nicely written by you.Amit

  1. Date: 11/2/2011 4:58:00 AM

    nice,,, very nice Suzanne ;}

  1. Date: 11/1/2011 9:58:00 AM

    Oh, the angst when not together. Lovely verse expressing your longing.

  1. Date: 10/31/2011 4:14:00 PM

    wow,,very wonderful,,and brilliant,,i loved reading of the yearning for love...

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 8:59:00 AM

    excellent work loved it

  1. Date: 10/29/2011 9:34:00 PM

    This is very nicely and touchingly written,Suzanne.Thank you for your comments on my poem.Fab

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