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ICE ON THE MOON

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ICE ON THE MOON

                  
  the vibrations of your footsteps makes me go numb
  i’m so tired of being scared and beat on like a drum
 when the full moon is out your eyes are like ice
your out of control walking around within a knife
your screaming pounds into my mind
 your fists bang into my spine
 your constant pointing and tapping my head
  i don’t even feel safe sleeping in our bed 
so every time a full moon arises i only get wiser
and i pray that you will one day know how it feels to burn by a lighter
what comes around goes around
maybe the next full moon you will go down

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  1. Date: 11/8/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Many congrats on your featured piece this week, rgds Janette

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 6:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserving poem being featured this week Crystal. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 11:09:00 AM
    nice emotion,,,,deep meaning in your words,,,,i get addicted to touching words from poets like you....

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    Date: 11/30/2011 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you for ur encouragement i need that in my life happy holidays