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Her first time

Standing on the wall
Her hands tightly gripping the bottle
Slowly moving in her heels praying
Not to fall

She is quite shy says her friend Becky
I want her dare me and I'm ready
Just a little tipsy I approach her steady
Her name is Anne come on let's dance
She pushes me aside I barely had a chance

You say you have boundaries
I will cross them
And I won't step on your lines
I'll snort them
Don't be in a hurry to leave early
Take time and enjoy your first ever party

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  1. Date: 12/10/2011 11:41:00 AM

    great work maina really interesting efite

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 2:20:00 PM

    very interesting situation and plot...but i feel the mechanics of the poem could be better organised...is it rhyme or free verse? is grammar deliberately loose or not? ........................... Why not try a re-work? you may surprise yourself at the improvments you make. Best wishes