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short version-I Rather Enjoy Being Played

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short version-I Rather Enjoy Being Played

By different lovers I’ve been kept, some skillful and a few inept. I always respond, unafraid. I rather enjoy being played. A Spaniard picked me up one time. His classic strumming was sublime. Notes poured from me like a cascade. I rather enjoy being played. That man released me, and soon I was picked up by a strange punk guy who stroked me roughly. Though betrayed, I rather enjoy being played. My strings broke often from his touch, yet thrilled was I by his thrum. Such unique new tunes from me were made. I rather enjoy being played. He gave me over to a boy who makes my strings vibrate with joy I climax with each smooth glissade. I rather enjoy being played. With him I hope to have remained in years to come. His love’s unfeigned. Although I know at times he’s strayed, I rather enjoy being played. By Andrea Dietrich For nette onclaud's "Sound Madness Poetry Contest" This is personification of my favorite instrument, the Sexy Guitar!

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  1. Date: 11/9/2011 8:23:00 AM
    this is verry clever. i liked it

  1. Date: 11/4/2011 12:17:00 AM
    I worked on a Rondeau and Krielle for way too long make em look way tooooo easy, girl! Love your personification of this hot instrument. I can feel it playing some sultry Spanish song! Do u just work and write do you guys keep these hits going strong? I am enthralled with your gifts.

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 7:27:00 PM
    Loved it when first read, not surprised to see it here. good work...Luv Margaret

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 5:16:00 PM
    congrats on this great winning poem andrea, love your use of personification, a unique angle on the theme, great title for it too!

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 4:31:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea on a top notch win with this exciting piece on chosen instrument luv.. wonderful words.. will yahoo mail u later tonight if my eyelids stay open..haha..

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 11:13:00 AM
    I love the personal approach you've taken here. You played me very very well. Love your spunk sunshine girl, love, Vie

  1. Date: 11/3/2011 10:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Sound Madness" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/13/2011 6:10:00 PM
    This is wonderful Andrea. Enjoyed!

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 3:42:00 PM
    Full or abridged, it still works a treat : )

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 10:53:00 AM
    Bold and beautiful with the blend of superb craftsmanship by which you have weaved this extraordinary beautiful Poem Andrea. My good wishes for your contest. I have not added anything new but would be rewriting soon. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra…Andrea Dietrich

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 5:12:00 PM
    You is one wild, wild woman, Andrea. I know - it's just a poem. This is so bold, it's bound to win. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/11/2011 12:05:00 PM
    I surely do luv the Kyreille flavor form.. good luck in the contest.. I enjoyed the long form too Andrea.. this one is tops for the contest ..good luck.luv...

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 10:02:00 PM
    I read the longer version first then came to the short. You did well here, the continuity was not lost. Yea! for the sexy guitar....Margaret

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 7:14:00 PM
    Very nice Andrea

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 4:06:00 PM
    Great write on this one Andrea. you were played -unique one. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 5:13:00 AM
    Wonderful poem in a challenging form.Enjoyed.Best wishes.