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Love story

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As a child I would sit and cry. Pray to God for a way out at night. Along came a boy who changed my world. I knew from the start you were the one. Everyone said it was not love We were too young to know of that. I was 16 and you were 18, we were just children running wild and free. Spending every minute together, Felt Like I was living in a love song. With every beat of my heart our love grew strong. We became one on that faithful September day I took your hand and knew everything would be ok. You were my rock and I loved you so much. Nothing would have torn us apart. Years have passed by and times have changed. I went my way and you stayed the same. Feels like we are living in two different worlds. Never did I see this coming down the road. Always thought we would love forever When will our hearts collide again? When will we feel like more than friends? I hope this isn’t the start to the end. I hope we can find the love we once had When that boy came along and changed my life Sweeping me off my feet on that warm summers night. We cuddled under the stars so bright. Holding tight hoping for the night to never end As we became more than just friends.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:51:00 PM
    CORY, CONGRATS !! In my sisters, brokenness' contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:16:00 PM
    Beautiful and bittersweet love story Cory....sadly it happens to too many of us. Congrats on your wonderful win! Hugs

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poen winning in ~SKAT's "Brokenness" contest Cory. It is wonderful to see you here at the Soup once again. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:09:00 AM
    Big congrats Cory xx

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:58:00 AM
    WARMCONGRATS CORY MY BUDDY ON A SUPERB WRITE AND TOP OF THE CHARTS WIN LUV .. WAY TO GO ..

  1. Date: 10/25/2011 5:50:00 AM
    Cory , sad but a beautiful moment in a life time. A heartfelt and romantic poem. Anne Soup mail -

  1. Date: 10/24/2011 10:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Cory. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2011 1:02:00 AM
    A lovely poem with tinge of nostalgia.Congrats cory on your win.Thanks for your congratulatory messages at my page.

  1. Date: 10/22/2011 8:49:00 PM
    congrats cory on a super fantastic win with this dynamic delight poetry my sweet friend.. so happy PS is back up and running luv.. so happy to be able to read u again...

  1. Date: 10/22/2011 6:19:00 PM
    Great poem here, Cory; especially for the raw human elements of doubt and angst woven into the lines. This make it more real and beyond just another airy love poem. Well done. Congratulations on your win in Tracie's contest~!

  1. Date: 10/22/2011 1:11:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Cory. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 10/22/2011 12:35:00 PM
    Great story, nicely told Cory. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 7:49:00 PM
    Awe amazing write. Wish I could experience this. Keep writing :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 6:42:00 PM
    Nice Write!

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 8:51:00 PM
    a riveting write free spirit with all the emotional power conveyed.. I was 15 and my first boyfriend/hubby was 18 when we met and it was instant love... it lasted for 12 years but then he changed and after five sons he could not grow any more and I soared beyond him and that was the end..so these words fit me so well ... but we are friends now and it's OK with my current hubby.. for the sons sake..luv..excellent..one of your very best ...buddy..

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 5:40:00 PM
    I love this.. so much... favorite'd...

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 5:08:00 PM
    Dripping with patience .....and......agony. Curious how much time has passed since this event occurred. It still seems so raw....wow. Thanks for sharing your heart here today.

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 4:26:00 PM
    oh, you break my heart, cory...just beautiful and soul-tugging! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 3:58:00 PM
    sharp diction..every word cuts into my heart.... thanks... lovely...

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 2:43:00 PM
    Nice, reminds me of an old friend I still miss.