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Morning dawn

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Morning dawn

 Sedoka... 5-7-7-5-7-7
morning marinate merge in lost meditation losing all irritation absorb, marinate line up on new principle marinate in new precept of morning session evaluate marinate accept life’s renewed menu bind the old concept leave concepts of strife behind enter dawn of a new day as in eagle’s flight I have mitigated wings unlimited potential power essential infinite infinity I advance in destiny =========== In Honor of Nette And contest: In 24 hours By John Moses Freeman

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  1. Date: 10/27/2011 9:00:00 AM
    Lovely write, John - and another form I've never tried before. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 10:41:00 AM
    I love the wisdom in your words John, fine poetry my friend. Most deserved of it's win. Have a lovely weekend :)

  1. Date: 10/15/2011 8:07:00 AM
    This day u have painted is full of soooo much potential...so much optimism....wouldn't it be awesome if everyone felt the way this poem describes the opportunity of a new day? Congrats poet, on this great win! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 1:59:00 PM
    "infinite infinity" , that is my favorite line, thanks for sharing this, neverending, neverendin verse :)

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 1:46:00 AM
    oh, and I see congratulations are in order. Way to GO!

  1. Date: 10/12/2011 1:45:00 AM
    YOu are my opposite, the early dawn!! And full of nature. Wonderful one john.

  1. Date: 10/10/2011 6:35:00 PM
    champion, moe.. SOUP MAIL!!

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 4:37:00 PM
    wow, John, like this one lots. That last stanza specially packed with fine one liners "mitigated wings" bein' my particular fave. Grats on the place in nette's 'test. Oh, and not fond of granola, are ya? Does that mean you eschew tofu, too? Just guessin' Happy eve, namaste~N

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    Date: 10/9/2011 4:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I like food in general Nancy, thats why I'm on diet two thirds of the time. Smile. Frosted mini wheats and flakes. Chinese food yum, yum. "get autta da way me sweet tooth tuday!"
  1. Date: 10/9/2011 11:48:00 AM
    Thank you John for your nice comments. I am not able to enter your contest at this time. I usually enjoy the limerick style but I have been going through the trial of my brother's terminal illness and his death yesterday so can find no hilarity to write about. Next time. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 4:38:00 AM
    Congratulations John A well deserved win cheers Margaret

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 9:54:00 PM
    Great work, John.Congratulations on your big win!

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 2:35:00 PM
    Congrats Moses on a dynamic win with grandiose poetry so wonderful my friend..enjoy with luv.

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 11:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on a great win, John. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 9:59:00 AM
    Wonderful poetry John, the way it should be written. A most enjoyable read. Have a lovely weekend :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2011 9:00:00 AM
    a thoughtful write ripe with potential. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/7/2011 11:50:00 PM
    Sedoka 577577 I like that line when you said "Unlimited Potential" Your nice comments are heart warming John. I enjoyed counting your sedoka! Dalila

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 6:52:00 PM
    very wise and insightful, not to mention thought provoking.. enjoyed a lot.. feel free to notify me when you have some more up if I don't find them on my own..

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 3:49:00 PM
    Words of wisdom written as only you can, John. Best wishes in Nette's contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 3:12:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..In eagle's flight with the Holy Spirit's power under my wings, I can do anything..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 10/6/2011 2:25:00 PM
    Oh ! 4got again ...vote ...77777777777

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