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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2012 7:55:00 AM

You put your heart into it so how can it be bad. Thank you Nathan for your kind comments on my attempts at writing. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/28/2011 9:36:00 AM

i'm not a haiku expert, but it seems to me that this is a good way to describe the wind, which can't be seen. you appeal to another sense instead, which i think is a great way of going about it :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/20/2011 5:45:00 PM

Fine haiku - Hooray for the "wind from the south". Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/27/2011 10:46:00 AM

you need to attempt more haiku's.... this really stinks the big one... you need to try harder.. before your face sees the back of my hand

frank herrera

Date: 10/7/2011 3:14:00 AM

Nice to See how you used this Form. I Like it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2011 4:05:00 PM

I like the picture this creates, Jakitz.

Date: 10/5/2011 10:12:00 AM

Nice use of imagery. Haiku is a difficult form to master--at least the type that get published in haiku magazines. I've been studying it for awhile. There are so many ideas on what constitutes one that it gets confusing for me sometimes. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2011 10:08:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work...Not sure exactly what it is saying..Maybe need explanation..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2011 9:54:00 AM

A heart felt poem... nice attempt though,.... GOD BLESS your soul,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2011 9:59:00 AM

I'm kidding BABE~ I'm watching that movie *GONE WITH THE WIND* it starr's batman and Gandhi

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2011 9:54:00 AM

with the hard wind from the south...