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Temptation

Save me from this chaotic place
My surroundings are unfamiliar
My head is spinning, i think i'm falling
Please, will you be the one who saves me

Don't leave me sinking
Into a pool of confusion
At this rate all hope is abandoned
I'm rapidly losing control

Everyone is staring at me
At my weak body being sucked in
Tempatation is gradually taking over me
I try to hide my shame as my breathing quickens

I gasp my last breath as i enter the unknown
Temptation and i are now one...

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  1. Date: 10/1/2011 12:07:00 PM

    Vanessa, I have Parrotts in my family. Do you have any relatives in Ohio?

    Parrott Avatar Venessa Parrott Date: 10/1/2011 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ummm, i know that my Grandad may have family in America but i have no idea where, and i couldnt possibly find out has he doesnt talk to me any more. sorry