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do you

do u love me
      or 
do u care 

what would u do
         if 
i wasn't there?
 
is this love
      or is it
 lust are u someone i can trust 
?
 
can u fix me when im broken
         using
  words still unspoken?
 
if my heart was in your hand 
           would you
  love me and understand,
 
 understand the words i speak 
                 and
  understand the things i seek?

Do you
Would you ?

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  1. Date: 9/30/2011 9:25:00 PM

    Well, this expresses a lot of understandable questions that are only resolved by time and good judgement. Not easy to be a judge of character, is it? I have often given people the benefit of the doubt. But if it looks and smells like a skunk--ouch! Your poem is very nicely done. I enjoyed it a lot. The rhyme scheme is fun. Thanks