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Will I Survive

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Will I Survive

You hurt me You broke me You might as well have killed me Will I survive After you Tortured my heart Played with my feelings Will I survive After you dumped me Like I was a bag of trash After you told me I was useless Will I survive After I gave you all the love I had in me After I gave you my all Will I survive

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  1. Date: 10/2/2011 11:03:00 AM
    Remember that it is you who are the captain of your life. You may have to try lots of different things, but there is a spark within you. I see it in your writing. You have a heart of gold. It just needs a little push in the right direction from your best friend--you! Find someone to talk to. There are counselors at school if you are in that realm. You sound like a wonderful young person. I will be here from time to time if you want. Remember that what you have to do is hard.

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 10:56:00 AM
    So, one really hard thing to do is to find what you like to do and do it. Then, things will start to happen in a positive way. It sounds simple but it is not easy to find a path. There's no real instant happiness. Some people seem to have a charted course and others do not. This has taken me a lifetime to experience and figure out. At times I have been on a dead end and had to try something else. The work, travel. and experience makes your identity and will allow you to feel good about u.

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 9:20:00 AM
    Thank-you for your comment. I have been through many years and many tears along the way. So, I know what this feels like. Life has taught me I can't have what I want when I want it. But it can still be wonderful because through time and travail, things tend to work out. Keep on writing because you have what it takes!

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 9:46:00 PM
    You better survive because you have a talent for this. And you are no bag of trash. You are a sensitive and wonderful human being with a lot of love hidden in reserve inside your heart.