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Thoughts

Im confused with life

Why is it confusing

One minute your happy as can be then someone or something has to mess it up 

Or you mess it up yourself..

It seems i can never be happy 

It seems i mess up everything that is good in my life

Last year i carved my wrist with a knife (some what like cutting)

I did it cuz of my parents the way they treated me what they did..
 
I felt alone 

No one could help me 

People tried but they couldnt change anything..

-Brittany- 

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  1. Date: 9/30/2011 1:54:00 PM
    sad...we can't like handle all of our emotions..but we can try...somethings life can be a pain in the ass....but we shouldn't forget the funny memories..don't let sad memories clean them out...lovely poem due...it comes from the heart,that's what makes it perfect

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    Date: 9/30/2011 2:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you :) haha and ill try not to forget the funny memories :D
  1. Date: 9/30/2011 1:07:00 PM
    A sad poem indeed. The teenage years can be difficult, for various reasons. Most of us remember difficult teenage years...at odds with parents, friends who turn out to be not so good friends, and confused feelings over many things. These things are all part of growing up. Writing about your difficulties and frustrations can help you come through them. I wish you well with your writing and with your life. Kind regards, Robert.