Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:52:00 PM
    The cockerel and hens are so naturally protective as you paint this careful image of Mother Nature..your verbage in here is so strong...love the hidden crannies and the first light from heaven. Missing your wonderful poetry, Gauti, Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/20/2012 4:20:00 AM
    I've had no experience with these birds Gautami, are they native to your region? Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 11:11:00 PM
    hi....p.d.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 7:54:00 PM
    wow, it's been ages since you posted anything new, what happened, sweetie. NO wonder i have not commented to you lately. AS for the fireflies in my poem, those are metaphorical, they symbolize the lights of the town. Utah has no fireflies unfortunately. I miss those little bugs. I grew up with them in summer nights in Iowa!

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 1:04:00 AM
    G.P.,, STOPPING BY TO READ... VERY INTERESTING,...P.D.

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 5:42:00 AM
    At the first crack of dawn here in the states, I am reading about these hens of yours waiting to crow....a wonderful poem to start the day, Gautami. Are these birds indigenous to your neck of the woods? Hope this day is a grrrrreat one. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 1:16:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Gautami. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 12:01:00 PM
    excellent visuals Gautami in these lines of Nature's tale of survival of the fittest luv.. so glad u have returned .. good luck if for any contest posted ..my friend...