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Soup drama

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Soup drama

Last week featured poetic Drama Like living at home with your momma Poetic, inspiration Perhaps taken vacation So watch your P’s, your Q’s and comma Jack’s Sprat had the nastiest critic Mary said, “You just better quit it!” Jack said, “I may as well split!” Mary’s mad enough to spit Soup is family, don’t you get it!!!! So be kind to your critics Often times they don’t get it Write loving features Appease mad creatures Write of love or forget it ++++++++++++++++++++ For and in honor of Carol Brown And contest: Write it for yourself

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  1. Date: 10/2/2011 9:21:00 AM
    Excellent Limerick John based on recent events on the Soup. Have a lovely Sunday :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 6:12:00 PM
    Dear Moses- You got this haiku thing down pat! Thanks for being a positive force amongst the writers and for every comment that helps a new poet like me learn to write better. Golden Rule Haiku. For sure!!! Check out Robert Ball's most recent article on this site. A great finishing touch to convey what your haiku says. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 1:16:00 PM
    Love this poem and I agree with what you say. Thank you for my placement on your contest. I was away all week and this was a nice way to start the weekend. Have a great weekend. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/1/2011 2:59:00 AM
    Wow, I missed a great poem (and a great contest) while I was away, John. I agree with everything you're implying in this witty limerick. Enough Soup Operas! I'm afraid to even look at blogs anymore. Congratulations on your great win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 11:38:00 PM
    Congrats Moses on a fantastic win with this superbly crafted and amazing poetry..the lines are more than perfect..they are special... they are truth... u should blog this one luv...

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 11:30:00 PM
    Many congrats dear Moses for this win.

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 8:02:00 PM
    Good advice John and I think things are much better. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 6:41:00 PM
    You did yourself proud Moses. Congratulations I enjoyed the poem you wrote for yourself. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 12:33:00 PM
    A rational man & mind! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 8:14:00 AM
    A nice one, John! lol... at least the drama is gone,,, be sure to close your doors to it,,,p.d.

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 12:06:00 AM
    Hi, john. this has a cute message in that third stanza. Hope it does well for ya in Carol's contest. Luv, Andrea