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A flowing stream

I was in the Yorkshire Dales
just the other day,
and sat where Emily Bronte
used to sit and play.

I gazed into the water
just below my feet;
it brought words of inspiration,
so pure yet oh so sweet.

Rapturous ovations
seemed to burst into the air,
making me pause and wonder 
if Emily was still there!

A gentle breeze whispered 
quietly in my ear,
'This stream is full of magic
come listen and you'll hear;


The drip, drip, drip, dripping
of the water from above,
bringing tender, caring, meaning
of peace and hope and love.'

29th September 2011 Robert Davidson


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  1. Date: 10/3/2011 8:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Robert. Love, Carol

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 10/3/2011 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol x
  1. Date: 10/2/2011 1:18:00 AM

    Sounds like a love story to me, well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 10/3/2011 6:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Lee for your comments
  1. Date: 10/1/2011 5:09:00 PM

    Congrats Robert on HM for flowing waters contest with lovely lines of poetic art luv..

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 10/3/2011 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda-Marie and you did brilliantly x
  1. Date: 10/1/2011 12:31:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in in the Flowing Water contest Robert

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 10/3/2011 6:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    cheers Bob
  1. Date: 10/1/2011 12:01:00 AM

    Nicely written, Robert. Congrats on your Honorable Mention. Kim

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 10/3/2011 6:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kim
  1. Date: 9/30/2011 11:08:00 PM

    congrats on your HM in the contest with this lovely entry

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson Date: 10/3/2011 6:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Francine