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Unveiled

Here, I unveil my thoughts
And start by telling you
That when you’re near 
I feel an ache
That breaks
My heart in two

Here, I paint a vivid
Portrait that reveals
Temptation and desire
Kept carefully concealed

Here, I clearly illustrate 
The bright, burning flame
The thought of you ignites
That only you can tame

Here, I share the sun
That rises in your eyes
The smile that has become
This ailing heart’s demise

Here, left transparent
Forbidden and confined
Ardent thoughts of you
Burning up my mind

Here, poetically scripted
In terms you'll understand
Just like a captive bird
My heart’s at your command

Here, left unhidden
Is craving never- ending
Most unmerciful longing
Incredibly unyielding

Here freed, unleashed 
Is truth kept restrained 
Reality that in dreams 
Is doomed to remain 

Camille Rose Castillo 2011 



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  1. Date: 9/24/2011 7:14:00 AM

    fantastic...love your work my friend...very interesting...thank God i read this today