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View From The Promenade

The speeding cars make me dizzy,
So I clutch the iron rails
That separate me from the highway below
And concentrate 
On the skyline along the Promenade
To reinstate equilibrium.
Sky and water supporting vertically.

Offering perfect balance,
The horizontal bar stretches on and on.

Imagine it gone.
I think then that we
Would not walk upright,
But stumble, then crawl
Upon this stroller's path.

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  1. Date: 9/23/2011 3:04:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts penned..Sara

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/29/2011 2:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara.
    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 10/29/2011 2:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara.
  1. Date: 9/23/2011 2:36:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Beverly. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

    Crespo Avatar Beverly Crespo Date: 9/23/2011 7:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Dear Carol, Thank you for your warm welcome.