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Oh, Funny Owl

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Oh, Funny Owl

Oh, funny owl, I sure relate
to you. I also stay up late!
My eyes, like yours, are mellow green
and staring too, but at a screen.

I stare at E-mails and TV
until I know that finally
I must retire myself to bed
and rest my weary night owl head.

I feel so rotten when I wake
I have to do a double take.
I see the clock. It's eight a.m.
I sit up grumbling, "Damn, oh, Damn."

Then brimming with new morning cheer,
I drag myself before the mirror.
And what I see upon my face
are little lines I can't erase.

Oh, funny owl, we're not so wise,
with circles underneath our eyes.
And now I get to look like hell
because I love the night so well.



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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 8:21:00 PM

    Andrea Such a cute and funny write. I can relate because I have insomnia and its hard to sleep. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Birthday poem. Yes, my birthday was yesterday.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 12:44:00 PM

    Wow, This is a great poem. I love every stanza. Bravo!

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 11:22:00 PM

    As a fellow night owl I like this. There's just WAY too many things I must check up on before I hit the hay (and even when I do hit it I still, now and then, check my phone). My friend at work works at a coffee shop as well... she gets up 5 in the morning and goes to bed at midnight... I'm guessing it's all the caffeine. Even as I type this message it's almost midnight for me... fun poem!

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 6:48:00 AM

    Haha this is true for me also...I am a night owl.Enjoyed the humour here....But perhaps nancy wanted more..

  1. Date: 9/23/2011 6:18:00 AM

    We don't share the Night Owl personality..I am exhausted and ready for bed at dark..In the mornings, I can't sleep and have to get up be comforted though I look and feel the same way..Thanks for the encouraging reviews..Yes, I have written many Diminished Hexaverse. When I was trying to learn some new forms, I practiced on that one many times..Sara

  1. Date: 9/22/2011 12:40:00 PM

    Been there, done that... lol, who'm I kiddin'?... AM there DOIN' that nearly every weekday! Great write, Andrea. Happy day~N

  1. Date: 9/22/2011 4:06:00 AM

    Delighted! Excellently Crafted--I was intrigue-ed, amused, and satisfied--with PERFECTION. Hope you are healing WELL Dear Friend.

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 7:15:00 PM

    HOO are you writing about in this one...HOO could it be!?! :) Ha. I am being an idiot with ridiculous jokes today! I like your cute piece of work HOOOTIE HOOOO! Did you ever notice that owls sing the same beat, no matter where you are....it goes " HOO ha HOO...Hoo HOO! Do it aloud and you will know what I mean. (Or maybe you will just think I belong in a madhouse:)

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 2:56:00 AM

    I am smiling as i write, well done Andrea..

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 8:59:00 PM

    Cute write here dear poet ! It was a pleasure reading this witty poem Andrea ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 8:36:00 PM

    Love the night time and owls awesome poem p.d.

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 4:34:00 PM

    LOL, I know just how you feel - I'm not a lark either

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 4:12:00 PM

    it's 4am, so we are night trackers, andies... bewitched! winning wishes..:)huggs, nette

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 2:10:00 PM

    haha! how I can relate to this-- I am such a night owl! Very witty piece you got here, Andrea! You know what they say, birds of the same feather.... ok, I am being corny....lol gosh I am soo eating my words, blush blush blush!!

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 11:50:00 AM

    Very amusing, Andrea. Enjoyed this. Kim

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 11:17:00 AM

    very clever and amusing. i love the rhyme and the flow. the first verse is great!

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 11:14:00 AM

    Amusing! You have a night owl friend in me. I like to write when its quiet. CR

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 10:29:00 AM

    and I too am a night owl as u know Andrea and this is a very cute idea for a poem.. fits us both so well and I rather like the night life..haha.. great lines of entertainment my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 10:29:00 AM

    Who, who would do such a thing? Funny Andrea. Tony