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THE BRUTAL MAN

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Below is the poem entitled THE BRUTAL MAN which was written by poet M-key D'Rhymer. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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THE BRUTAL MAN

I may be gentle as Jack
but patience is what i lack
my best word is smack
therefore,no nut is too hard for 
me to crack

I always walk in the park
even when nature says;its dark
cos,my every step ignites a spark
so i don't deserve that nike mark

I creep before i walk
so i think before i talk
my muscles is like a bundle of 
stalk
thats why am stronger than a 
hulk
so i leave more traces like a chalk

I bath with words
lotion with oratory 
and perfume with poetry
so i make the library my secret 
laboratory

Am not too much of a wordsmith
but i drop iron-lines that can not 
be beaten by a blacksmith
the WORLD is a dark movie 
so i act more better than 
willsmith
am now your cinema,so grab 
some wool-candy and take a sit.
Its 'THE BRUTAL MAN'..
I go brutal with words...

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  1. Date: 2/10/2012 5:43:00 AM
    D'rhymer i love this shit. Boy this shit HOT!

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 1:11:00 PM
    This is great... luv it..

    D'Rhymer Avatar M-key D'Rhymer
    Date: 9/19/2011 2:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks dear...maybe i should dedicate it 2 u..
  1. Date: 9/18/2011 8:32:00 AM
    You 'assault' me with your well written iron lines. Like the poem.

    D'Rhymer Avatar M-key D'Rhymer
    Date: 9/19/2011 2:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ha,biko..don't let the bristish police hear that o...else i'll be rhyming for a prison warder....