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Flirtation

 
                                       A backward glance
                                        A crimson blush
                                          A risked smile
                                Feigned melancholy interest
                                   Sparkling eyes dance
                                      A wink and a nod
                                 Lips tenderly caress an
                                        Extended hand
                                     Dreamy intoxication 
                                           Half in Love  



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  1. Date: 10/5/2011 3:24:00 PM

    emm...even the title had me interested...nice work my friend.beautiful pieces like this makes me want to come here regularly

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 11:32:00 AM

    So warm and sweet,Lori.Nice and beautiful use of words,Lori

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 1:57:00 PM

    I have to laugh at one thought - usually, I got thrown-up on from fully intoxication.... thanks for the nice comment......George

  1. Date: 9/20/2011 12:50:00 AM

    Cool last line, only half in love, but it's SOMEthing anyway. Very nice buildup in this little poem!

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 9:17:00 PM

    This has a medieval caress to it Lori, beautifully done; your adjectives are superlative.

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 4:29:00 PM

    What a delight this poem is to read Lori. Your last line was genius. Thanks for your comments on my autumn poem.

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 1:36:00 PM

    Lori...this is beautiful...thanks for sharing this lovely poem...smiles..chiquita

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 9:44:00 AM

    Interesting work..Very creative idea for a write....Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting..I appreciate you taking the time to do so..Sara

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 10:31:00 AM

    5h30 this morning . . . I'm probably not the only one , but have experienced exactly that before , words true to reality . Thank you , I loved this ink Gustav .

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 8:56:00 AM

    The wallflower blooms in the heat of the night. He blushes and flushes, it is quite a sight. There's not enough love to calm his advance. He's head over heals at this wondrous chance.