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Time to Go

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Time to Go

Part 1 

You wanna shake your head and say,
"I've had it with this town" 
You wanna pack up everything 
And tear your pictures down

Your lawn is full of weeds 
And your air conditioner's shot 
Is it time to pay the rent again? 
Definitely not!

One way ticket- "Glitterville" 
Where lights illuminate 
The limitless potential 
Of a foreign license plate 

Part 2

A fresh start was a good start 
But what is it with that place? 
Your garden's full of weeds again 
And your air conditioner breaks 

You decide it's time to go on back
And see familiar faces 
You gotta change the place you have 
It's useless to change places 

By Kyle Ezra Kriticos 

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  1. Date: 5/29/2013 5:23:00 PM
    This is so true. So often we try to just run from life and our problems..but they will always follow us if not dealt with. great piece.

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 11:18:00 PM
    poetry soup should just get a like button lol

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 4:27:00 PM
    Insightful piece, Kyle

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 8:51:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Kyle. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 8:07:00 PM
    LOL yup..you have to change yourself first if you want a real change. light & love