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Taking Turns

<                                       iron propeller
                                 sitting entrance to driveway
                                   slowly turning blades
                              like the hands of time on clock 
                                 longing for extra seconds 


                                    Hummingbirds buzzing
                              red gold blue and green headed 
                                    just waiting for turns
                               to capture it's own bountys
                                   succulant sugar water  



Written By 
Katherine Stella 9/13/2011

Entry For Francine Roberts
The View-A Tanka Contest
G.L. All       

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  1. Date: 9/15/2011 4:25:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery, my friend. A sure fire winner, in my opinion : )

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:54:00 PM

    Wishing you the best in the contest Katherine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 11:02:00 PM

    what a nice idea here the two contrasting images. I really like this, katherine.