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Blunder

It all begins with a notion That transforms into erosion Then follows with some confusion I don't want your temptation You were never my creation Accomplice of my suffocation Throughout my nightmares i have dreamt I won't have a final attempt Evading your divulged contempt Searching for a simple target I am unwilling to forget Attracting me like a magnet It's not easy to stop pretending Hard to protect what your defending To be forever condescending I am not the one to complain Furious eyes full of disdain You're impossible to sustain You were never close to being right Second chances slowly dim the light You are nothing but an oversight

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 6:07:00 PM
    Excellent rhyming scheme and what emotion you display on this one. I'm really liking your poetry. (: Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 7:27:00 PM
    not pretending....I do like this poem....welcome to poetry soup!! enjoyed reading Your work!!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 4:09:00 PM
    I decided I love the way you write. Wonderful.

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 4:20:00 PM
    Good rhyming work..Sara